Audience Feedback Changes on Double Page Spread

After reading all the comments, and suggestions I got from my audience feedback I have gone back and edited certain features of my double page spread.

Firstly I went through all the text and fixed all the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, that were pointed out in my feedback. I then decided to change the colour of the word 'TAKEOVER' from yellow to black. Afterwards I felt that it seemed to plain and it needed something extra, so I added drop shadows to the text. I added the drop shadow effect to the text 'MUSIC TAKEOVER' and the pull quote next to the main image.