Magazine Double Page Spread Draft

This is my draft of my magazine double page spread; I have used CLASH Magazine and Q Magazine to help me design the layout. I have designed the layout to be as simplistic but effective as possible. I want to give it a modern, sleek, stylish look; as I feel my target audience will be attracted to this style. I feel I will add more text and image to this layout especially on the main image page as there will be a lot of blank spaces; but at the moment I'm not completely sure what to add or where so I have left it blank, and I will add to it as I feel is needed to appeal to my target audience.